Update atr-design-doc.md minor text changes to improve readability - #95
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its' line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable. lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference line 39: add comma after 'management' line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two