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Fix copy errors in privacy policy and terms of service - #79

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Copy/correctness fixes to the Privacy Policy and Terms of Service, surfaced while reviewing them for the Google OAuth verification of the AAuth Proxy.

Privacy Policy

  • Security section — meaning inversion: "we do control third parties' security processes" → "we do not control…" (the missing "not" contradicted the rest of the section).
  • Internal Processes: "how are Service is used or function" → "how our Service is used or functions"; "analyze use of the to determine" → "analyze use of the Service to determine".
  • "or perform" → "or performs"; removed a stray unmatched ")"; added a missing comma before "Site".
  • "Terms of Use" → "Terms of Service" — the policy referenced a document by a name that doesn't exist on the site.

Terms of Service

  • Removed leftover "rain" template placeholder → "Hellō" (Third Party Beneficiaries).
  • "the our App" → "our App"; "or terminated this Agreement" → "or terminate…".
  • "PARTERNS" → "PARTNERS"; "filled within one calendar year" → "filed…".
  • Filled the blank "Developer Name and Address" contactcontact@hello.coop.
  • "By entering into Terms of Service" → "these Terms of Service"; added a missing sentence-ending period.

No layout or structural changes — copy only.

🤖 Generated with Claude Code

https://claude.ai/code/session_01W5aU3Qb7ptyzvunw2oQLrx

Privacy Policy:
- Security: "we do control" -> "we do not control" third parties' security
  processes (the missing "not" inverted the meaning)
- Internal Processes: "how are Service is used or function" -> "how our Service
  is used or functions"; "analyze use of the" -> "analyze use of the Service"
- "or perform" -> "or performs"; remove stray ")"; add missing comma before "Site"
- "Terms of Use" -> "Terms of Service" (matches the actual document)

Terms of Service:
- Remove leftover "rain" template placeholder -> "Hellō"
- "the our App" -> "our App"; "or terminated" -> "or terminate"
- "PARTERNS" -> "PARTNERS"; "filled" -> "filed"
- Fill blank developer contact -> contact@hello.coop
- "By entering into Terms of Service" -> "these Terms of Service"; add missing period

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01W5aU3Qb7ptyzvunw2oQLrx
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dickhardt merged commit 29cc181 into main Jul 27, 2026
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